In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Businesses in
this
modern’s era have a different strategy
to promote their Fix the agreement mistake
strategies
products
to the customer
. Although
businesses do some new techniques for their products
to attract new customer
, I think it is negative development since it makes the Fix the agreement mistake
customers
products
to be lost its
identity or image Correct pronoun usage
their
from
the Change preposition
apply
product
To start with, most of the company
want to gain a profit from selling their products
. They done
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have done
with
many ways to get the Change preposition
apply
customer
, including advertisement and endorsement. Meanwhile, their techniques to approach customer
, Fix the agreement mistake
customers
sometimes
not always effective so Add a missing verb
are sometimes
that
they have to think differently with the aim of their Correct word choice
apply
products
to be known by community
. Add an article
the community
For example
, Indomie (Indonesian
noodles brand) has a competitor Correct article usage
an Indonesian
such
as Sedap. In order to beat the market of Sedap, Indomie has to innovate its product
by collaborating with influencers intending to be aware of the products
in society.
On the other hand
, the product
which evolved with differing ways of commercial get
a chance to have Correct subject-verb agreement
gets
an
attention Correct article usage
the
from
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of
audience
to know about the Correct article usage
the audience
product
. In addition
, the product
from the
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a
company
that have
a different technique of original promotion sometimes Change the verb form
has
lose
its image from the Change the verb form
loses
product
. For instance
, coca cola
is identic Add a hyphen
coca-cola
with
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to
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a bottle
the bottle
bottle
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bottles
while
in the past, the company
once changed its drink from bottle
to Correct article usage
a bottle
can
and Correct article usage
a can
resulting
loss of financial of Add an article
the resulting
company
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the company
a company
due to
the customer
preferred
to buy the original one.
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preference
To sum up
, the new way of advertisement is developed by the company
to attract the awareness of customer
in an effort to gain Fix the agreement mistake
customers
of
profit by selling their Change preposition
apply
products
. Meanwhile, the techniques sometimes do not working
out well as expected Change the verb form
work
on
planning, Change preposition
in
such
as changing bottle
of coca cola to a can.Correct article usage
a bottle
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