You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing express concern about the missing card ask them what they intend to do You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as: Dear Sir or Madam, You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Stuti Sheth. I recently applied for a new credit

card

from your bank and the physical

card

is missing from the documents

send

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from the branch. So, I am writing a letter to address the issue.

Last

week , I received the documents for my

card

ending with *8905, which includes my temporary pin

as well as

the actual

card

. After noticing

this

, I am petrified, as nowadays there are

lot

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of scams and fraudulent activities

are

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going on. I am just worried

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that

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someone

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stolen the

card

from the sealed envelope and glued it the way it was. And

moreover

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I don't want someone to misuse the

card

. It's my humble request, to find out the root cause of

this

issue and act on

this

as soon as possible. Please block my

card

and re-issue the new one. Looking forward to hearing from you. Thank you so much for your time and consideration. Yours sincerely, Stuti Sheth

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

166 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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