You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing express concern about the missing card ask them what they intend to do You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as: Dear Sir or Madam, You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Stuti Sheth. I recently applied for a new credit

card

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from your bank and the physical

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is missing from the documents

send

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from the branch. So, I am writing a letter to address the issue.

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week , I received the documents for my

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ending with *8905, which includes my temporary pin

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the actual

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. After noticing

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, I am petrified, as nowadays there are

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of scams and fraudulent activities

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going on. I am just worried

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that

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someone

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stolen the

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from the sealed envelope and glued it the way it was. And

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moreover

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I don't want someone to misuse the

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. It's my humble request, to find out the root cause of

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issue and act on

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as soon as possible. Please block my

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and re-issue the new one. Looking forward to hearing from you. Thank you so much for your time and consideration. Yours sincerely, Stuti Sheth

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

166 words

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