The best way for governments to solve the problem of traffic congestion is providing free public transport in 24 hours per day, and seven days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, most of the countries facing traffic issues in metropolitan cities like Hyderabad and Banglore in India. The best way to solve
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issue is to provide free public transport every day. I agree with the statement but
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some misuses will happen. I will explain
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, providing free transportation to all travellers in public buses is a good decision from the government.
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, it should be restricted to people who are travelling
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long distances because it will be overcrowded and will create new problems.
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, everyone should go to the office at the same time
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buses have a capacity of 40 to 60 people at a time. So, better to keep rules like age restrictions or areas-wise free travel.
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, there is a chance of misusing the transportation even though there is no urgency to travel to the designated place.
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will cause real issues in need of people go to offices.
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, In India Delhi Chief has come up with the idea that odd number and even number plates for vehicles should come on alternate days.
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reduces some pollution but not completely.
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society. All in all, the government should
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the right decision on free transportation with a set of rules and it is
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responsibility to follow them by the public. So, it will be one of the best steps taken by the politicians.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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