Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that in many cities around the world there are constant traffic jams. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from owning cars?

I agree fully with the statement considering the
last
30 years of Transportation growth and the need for logistics.
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Traffic
Jams can be termed a critical issue for every country, which is inviting a range of problems for the environment and
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an Individual. In today's world,
Car
has become a mandatory "must-have" asset
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life. With the distances we need to cover to reach the office, kids' school, sporting clubs, and other public offices, we need a safer, easier way of transportation and
hence
the
car
, that too owned
car
became priority no. 1. Now
this
gives rise to a concerning situation obviously. A situation of too many vehicles on the road leads to
traffic
jams, fuel consumption and pollution in terms of air, and noise, heat generated is adding to the Global warming crisis too. The road rages are another increasing plethora of problems. We,
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humans created the need for transportation and so does the birth of
issues
related to it. As an individual, I think there are innovative ways possible to handle the
issues
mentioned above. One of the ways would be to regulate the
traffic
by socializing the concept of "Carpooling" where people can share the
car
for the identical or the same destination.
This
not only reduces no. of cars on the road but
also
fuel, and noise
along with
it. The sharing increases human interaction between the passengers, a positive side of the
solution
!! Another
solution
would be marking "even-odd" based on
car
numbering,
thus
alternate days we can have even-numbered cars and odd-numbered cars, which results in the mentioned benefits above. If we could club the
car
-pooling with
this
solution
, it will create wonders to have maximum benefits, with almost 90% removal of the
traffic
/ noise / fuel consumption
issues
. In my opinion, the Government can take the lead by assigning a
solution
committee for implementation state-by-state. Strict governance would bring the total neutralization of
such
impending
issues
forever. Government should
also
run public campaigns for making people aware of the
issues
as a nation.
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