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Food travels thousands of miles before it reaches customers. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative trend?

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According to
 Abraham's Maslow hierarchy of
need
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,
food
 and other consumables are regarded as basic human needs. Unfavorable weather conditions,
poor
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and poor
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 soil texture just to mention a few are among the reasons why
food
travel
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travels
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 miles before it reaches
it
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its
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 users.
Thus
, the transport of
food
to
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over
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 several miles is a positive trend. The principal reason why
food
 needs to travel thousands of miles is because
unfavorable
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of unfavorable
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 weather conditions that
hinders
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 the growth of certain crops.
For example
, the International
institute
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 of tropical agriculture reveal in their annual journal that 50% of the
asian
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Asian
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 countries experienced weather that inhibit the growth of palm
tree
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trees
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. Extract from
this
 tree
give
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 off to red-oil which is needed for
an
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 healthy diet.
As a result
 of
this
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these
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 unpalatable climatic conditions, Red oil needs to be transported to the affected Asia nations from
other part
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another part
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 of the world. Despite the
above discussed
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 cause, there are several reasons why
transportation
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the transportation
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 of
food
 is considered a beneficial trend.
Firstly
,
this
 trend serves as a source of income
to
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for
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 all the parties involved. The reward for labour is wages. When
food
 is been transported to distant places, money is been paid by
food
 users, employment opportunities are been created during the process. Because of
this
, the economic status of those involved will be improved. Another reason why
this
 development is regarded
positive
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as positive
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 is
because
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that
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 it helps meet
people
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people's
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 needs and desires. Studies from
American
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the American
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institute
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 of
food
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Food
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 say that a greater percentage of
food
 that satisfy American
people
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people's
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 curiosity comes from surrounding nations. Without
food
been
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being
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 transported to far places, meeting
food
 security will be a challenge for
people
. Access to quality and nutritious
food
 will be impaired.
Thus
, transporting
food
 to distant place helps to curb the problems of
food
 insecurity and help to satisfy
people
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people's
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 desire
on
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for
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food
. After analyzing how transportation of
food
 to far places helps to serve as means of revenue
as well as
also
 helping to quench
food
 insecurity, it has proven that
this
bring
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 more merits than demerits. It is hoped that
distant
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the distant
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 supply of
food
 continue to grow in an unshakable manner.
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