The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000

The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000
The line graph is an illustration of changes in the amount of
pizza
,
fish
and
chips
and
hamburgers
eaten by Australian adolescents on a yearly basis from a 25-year period from 1975 to 2000. Units are measured in
times
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.   From an
overall
perspective, it can be seen that the
consumption
of
pizza
was higher rather than
other
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two types of food in the first year of the graph,
whereas
it was a dramatic drop which passed through the
consumption
of
fish
and
chips
and
hamburgers
. Both the least
times
of
fish
and
chips
and
hamburgers
rose sharply over the same time span.   From a detailed analysis, it is obvious that teenagers consumed
pizza
more
times
either
fish
and
chips
or
hamburgers
in 1975. There was a dip in 1980
then
it increased to nearly 100
times
which was followed by a consistent drop to only 40  in 2000. The decreased
times
of
pizza
crossed the two consumptions of
fish
and
chips
and
hamburgers
throughout the whole period.
In contrast
,
the
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fish
and
chips
consumption
yearly stood at about 10
times
in 1975 rose dramatically and reached
at
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a peak of 80 in 1985. It kept increasing gradually to 100 in 2000.  
In addition
, the
consumption
of
hamburgers
shows
the
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similar upward trends as that of
fish
and
chips
. The amount consumed started at about 10
times
then
it reached
at
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a high of over 80
times
. After 1995, the
consumption
of
hamburgers
remained the same throughout the rest period.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words pizza, fish, chips, hamburgers, times, consumption with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Consumption
  • Trend
  • Hamburgers
  • Pizza
  • Fried chicken
  • Period
  • Health awareness
  • Availability
  • Taste preferences
  • Marketing influence
  • Implications
  • Western culture
  • Peak periods
  • Promotions
  • Societal habits
  • Patterns
  • Popular
  • Declined
  • Introduction
  • Eating habits
  • Summarise
  • Prediction
  • Recommendations
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