The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000
The line graph is an illustration of changes in the amount of
pizza
, Use synonyms
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
and Use synonyms
hamburgers
eaten by Australian adolescents on a yearly basis from a 25-year period from 1975 to 2000. Units are measured in Use synonyms
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times
.
From an Fix the agreement mistake
time
overall
perspective, it can be seen that the Linking Words
consumption
of Use synonyms
pizza
was higher rather than Use synonyms
other
two types of food in the first year of the graph, Correct article usage
the other
whereas
it was a dramatic drop which passed through the Linking Words
consumption
of Use synonyms
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
and Use synonyms
hamburgers
. Both the least Use synonyms
times
of Use synonyms
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
and Use synonyms
hamburgers
rose sharply over the same time span.
From a detailed analysis, it is obvious that teenagers consumed Use synonyms
pizza
more Use synonyms
times
either Use synonyms
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
or Use synonyms
hamburgers
in 1975. There was a dip in 1980 Use synonyms
then
it increased to nearly 100 Linking Words
times
which was followed by a consistent drop to only 40 in 2000. The decreased Use synonyms
times
of Use synonyms
pizza
crossed the two consumptions of Use synonyms
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
and Use synonyms
hamburgers
throughout the whole period. Use synonyms
In contrast
, Linking Words
the
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apply
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
Use synonyms
consumption
yearly stood at about 10 Use synonyms
times
in 1975 rose dramatically and reached Use synonyms
at
a peak of 80 in 1985. It kept increasing gradually to 100 in 2000.
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In addition
, the Linking Words
consumption
of Use synonyms
hamburgers
shows Use synonyms
the
similar upward trends as that of Correct article usage
apply
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
. The amount consumed started at about 10 Use synonyms
times
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then
it reached Linking Words
at
a high of over 80 Change preposition
apply
times
. After 1995, the Use synonyms
consumption
of Use synonyms
hamburgers
remained the same throughout the rest period.Use synonyms
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