Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think is a positive or a negative development?

There is an increasing number of

people

who want to use natural methods rather than their doctors for pain relief.

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products of nature ,and the reasons for the negative side like delusion and disbelief. I will point out why it is a useful way. Most

people

believe in only doctors

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since they have professional qualifications.

However

,one of the disadvantages of the statement is that they may face a delusion ,If they do not prefer usual hospitals and doctors.

Such

a situation can be seen in many countries ,where some lie to patients about their treatment,

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also

people

who are suffering from

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delusion.Another fact is that the public does not believe that alternative meditation can heal diseases completely.

Moreover

,Sangemos do not have any certificates that indicate their ability so it can be said that traditional ways are mostly useless. Despite the above facts, Most

people

still admit their power of them. Of course , They

also

have abundant causes to do that. First of all , Alternative

medicines

are not as expensive as

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medicines

and injections from hospitals. What is more , There are not any operations that can be risky and a large amount of money in traditional treatments . In my opinion,

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natural ways of pain relief include mainly natural ingredients is the advantage of

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site,

whereas

all usual

medicines

are added some extra substance which can affect us badly.

Thus

using traditional methods can be better than hospitals. In conclusion,there are advantages

as well as

disadvantages on both sides ,

according to

me,Alternative

medicines

are a better way to be healthy.