The line graph shows the sales of gold in Dubai for 12 months in 2002 in millions of Dirhams. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows the sales of gold in Dubai for 12 months in 2002 in millions of Dirhams. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
line graph illustrates how much
gold
was sold in Dubai during 1 year. It can be concluded from
this
graph that
sales
in December decreased compared with those in January.
Firstly
, in January,
gold
worth 200
million
Dihram was sold, and
then
we can see a steady increase in February.
In
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March, has been
a
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significant growth, it was the most successful month for trades, and the
gold
was sold amount 350
million
Dihram. In April the number of
sales
dropped, has been selling
gold
for 250
million
. From April to July
sales
continued to drop. In August
sales
rise sharply, but in the next month,
it
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dropped again.
Then
in October, we can see an increase in
sales
, which steadily continues until December.
At the end
of the year, the point was approximately 180
million
, just the same as it was in the beginning.
Secondly
, from
this
graph, we can see the best
sales
were in March. The worst months are July and September, the points were above 150
million
Dihram.
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