The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table shows the reason why
people
in Edmonton use
their cars
in the city and the pie chart explains what type of transport
people
prefer to use
most of the time.
Looking at the pie chart first,
it is clear that
the car
is the most popular means of transport
in this
city. 45% of the people
say that they prefer to commute by car
. The second most popular form of transport
is the LRT, while
busses and taxis are the main means of transport
for the rest of the people
.
The table gives more detailed information about why people
use
their cars
. Surprisingly, 55% of the people
need to commute to work by car
. Cars
are also
used a lot for taking children to school or business
purposes. Only 15% of drivers are doing their shopping and, Change preposition
for business
similarly
, 15% need to travel by car
for leisure.
Overall
, people
in Edmonton make good use
of alternative methods of transport
but there is a heavy dependence on cars
for work.Submitted by cspheaa on
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