The graph below shows relative price changes for fresh fruits and vegetables, sugars and sweets, and carbonated drinks between 1978 and 2009.

The graph below shows relative price changes for fresh fruits and vegetables, sugars and sweets, and carbonated drinks between 1978 and 2009.
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The line graph provides information about changes in the
price
of three different food product groups in the USA from 1979 to 2009 and the
overall
trend in the
consumer
price
index
over these 30 years.
Overall
,
it is clear that
prices
increased for the three food product groups, despite fluctuations. At a glance, an increase in the
prices
for fresh fruits and vegetables was significantly higher than the rise in the general
consumer
price
index
. All the lines on the graph have the same starting figure in 1979. Over the period, the
consumer
price
index
rose steadily from around 60 in 1979 to over 200 in 2009.
Prices
for sugar and sweets and carbonated drinks showed similar trends.
Although
their
prices
also
rose, they were consistently below the
consumer
price
index
average after 1987. After many minor fluctuations, the number for sugar and sweets was 200 on the graph in 2009, higher than the final figure for carbonated drinks at 150.
Prices
rose sharply for fresh fruits and vegetables, particularly after 1989. From the same figure of about 60 at the start of the period, the
prices
finished at roughly 330 on the
index
in 2009.
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