The chart below shows the sleep patterns of people in five different occupations according to a Canadian study. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Please try to write at least 150 words.
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The chart gives information on individuals sleeping routines in 5 jobs in Canada(students, truck drivers, full-time
mothers
, business executives and doctors).
Overall
, we can see that the students and the mothers
sleep the most whereas
the study shows that doctors sleep the lowest, also
in between we have truck drivers and business people who sleep an average amount of hours
.
First of all, the napping time of a student shows continuous sleep of 8 hours
at night which is a healthy routine, at the same time mothers
sleep 8 hours
but in different intervals of the day. Compared to students and mothers
, doctors sleep only for 5 hours
which is not sufficient for a human being.
As we know that the average nap hours
required for a man is 7-8 hours
we have business executives and truck drivers who sleep only 6 hours
which is also
not up to the mark. A good sleep will give you a good day.Submitted by Leena Kapoor on
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