Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: “It is better to be a follower than a leader.”

In daily

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life

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lives

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people have various positions in various parts of the world. A differentiation occurs between leaders and followers. Some people prefer to be a

leader

and

free

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;

nonetheless

, others like to be a follower and depend on others. As far as I am concerned, I would rather be a

leader

instead

of being a follower. Inıtially, a

leader

is a director of a

group

and they are able to decide freely by considering both themselves and their

group

. They can decide or act independently when compared to followers and other members of the

group

. It is a fact that, sometimes, conversations and brainstorming can be necessary to find the optimum choice,

however

, a

leader

can make a decision by themselves in a risky situation without discussions. Or even a

leader

can follow their own path when conflicts arise because of

clash

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of ideas since they have the power

among

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the

group

.

Therefore

, a

leader

is the independent symbol of the

group

and they are able to play the

dominator

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role of a

group

.

Secondly

, a person can gain

confidence

by being a

leader

and they can use their increased

confidence

in diverse areas. Followers

often

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involved in

such

discussions or conflicts,

they

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are not sufficiently able to apply their own ideas.

Nevertheless

, by leading a society or crowd, leaders incessantly obtain self-

confidence

. They start to decide more legitimately and calmly when they encounter stressed and

pressuring

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difficulties with the help of their

confidence

.

Moreover

,

this

confidence

can assure accomplishment for leaders. In different parts of their lives, they may be successful and canalize others with a sense of self-

confidence

., which could bring success

Consequently

, being a

leader

also

helps people to be more confident and

fulfill

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in different areas.

To sum up

, being a

leader

has positive effects and consequences.

First,

it helps to be more free and independent.

Second,

it

also

ensures being confident and determined. Up to me, I would definitely prefer to be a

leader

.