The pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two charts indicate the online
sales
for retail
sector in New Zeeland in Add an article
the retail
years
2003 and 2013. It is surprisingly interesting from Correct article usage
the years
pie
charts that some retail sectors Correct article usage
the pie
such
as sales
of clothes
and travel
tickets reduced from 2003 to 2013 on the internet
.
It is evident from the pie chart travel
sector was over 1/3 part of online shopping in 2003. Clothes
shopping was the second most preferred sector on the internet
in terms of shopping. Online sales
of music and films had almost same
percentage.
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the same
On the other hand
, online
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the online
sales
percentage of travel
tickets slightly fell to 29% in 2013. Online sales
of clothes
also
decreased from 24% to 16% in comparison to 2003. Music and films
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film
sales
were most preferred on the internet
shopping. Moreover
, the sales
of music and films were
critically 12% increased on the Unnecessary verb
apply
internet
in 2013. There was not any significant change between 2003 and 2013 on
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in
the
book Correct article usage
apply
sales
.
From my point of view, something serious should happened
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happen
at
online Change preposition
in
travel
and clothes
sales
like losing trust
of people Add an article
the trust
to
online shopping in New Zeeland between Change preposition
in
years
2003-2013. Correct article usage
the years
Otherwise
, online shopping was only increasing almost all over the world.Submitted by mr.mehdiyevkamran on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, clothes, travel, internet with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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