The increase in food production owes much to fertilizers and better machinery, but some people think that it has a negative impact on human health and community. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many individuals argue that food industries are making noise
due to
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of fertilizers but these are dangerous for human beings. The
arguement
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argument
is true and I will agree with
this
. First and foremost, the owners of different industries are looking for cheap land for their business so that, they move towards residential areas where the people are living their healthy life.
However
, they move there and install their instruments for food production with different sources even these sources
has
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have
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bad odour which harms one's life.
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, in Pakistan even in my city, the bricks factories are making too
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much polution
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polution arround
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pollution around
residential areas.
Due to
this
, we face warm conditions in our city.
On the other hand
, machinery
are
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also
income for dirt particles. Individuals who are facing
a
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apply
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asthma
also
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are also
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conscious of the bad impacts of dirt particles.
Moreover
, some landlords who have
huge
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amount of land with
wheat
, they are doing business using
wheat
production.
Wheat
income
also
contains different fertilizers which can be harmful for humans.
However
, harvesting is more
disaster
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disastrous
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than planting
wheat
. The process of harvesting involves filtering seeds from long leaves which can be done using
machine
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a machine
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called thresher. The steps of
filteration
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filtration
outcomes
large
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a large
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number of dust particles in
air
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the air
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which
effect
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affect
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patients who are suffering from air allergies.
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our country, allergy
cause
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by air
polution
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pollution
has
high
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a high
the high
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number of counts.
To conclude
, Food production
industuries
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industries
owners should ensure to run their
business
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businesses
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in
commertial
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commercial
areas even if the lands are expensive. But
this
will save humans from various infections and diseases.
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