Some people say that ' success is 10 percent talent and 90 percent hard work' is hard work the key to success or is talent also important?

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I think that many people
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want to be successful in the
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.Some people say that
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success
is more important than hard
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,in my opinion
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hard
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is the main key to success.I completely agree 10
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talent
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and 90
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hard
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. In my own view that if you have a
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but do not
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hard you can not show your real
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to the
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, Tomas Edison tried a thousand times to invent a light bulb .He failed 999 times,but he did not give up and kept trying.
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he invented the light bulb .Or Elon Musk is the richest businessman in the
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became the richest man in the
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work
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there are some professions that require more
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than hard
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,singers,painters,actors and so on. If they have no natural born
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, they will not
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succeed
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in their chosen profession even if they
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hard. In conclusion
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I think that everyone will be successful in their chosen job if they like it .If people don't
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hard in their chosen professions,they will not be successful
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