You have recently moved to a different city for work, but you want to maintain contact with a friend from your previous workplace. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter describe the city you moved to; tell him/her about your new job; invite him/her to visit you.

#city #work #contact #friend #workplace #job #visit

my dearest Lily, Hi sweetie! You have no idea how much I missed you since I have moved to Boardroom. I reside in a lovely

hotel

named Resort Park

Hotel

and it's really dreamy here. The city is quite hot and full of palm trees. At night coffee shops and restaurants are full of tourists and I enjoy watching them walking on the beach under the romantic moonlight.

Although

this

is a tourist city, I realized there are some historical places as well. You know it's not my cup of tea but I think you will like it. As I said before, I stay in a

hotel

now where I

also

work. Isn't it amazing? No more trouble stocking in the traffic on the way to work as I have a room to live in the

hotel

. I work in the reception here and I'm in charge of the day shift which is a big improvement for me. I will always be happy if you can pay a visit. I will be on holiday from 25th October to 25th January so I want to invite you to come here to spend some time together. You can stay in my room with me and all meals will be free. Hope you can make it. Can't wait to hear from you Lily

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

220 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You have recently moved to a different city for work, but you want to maintain contact with a friend from your previous workplace. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter describe the city you moved to; tell him/her about your new job; invite him/her to visit you.

The Closing

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