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The chart below show what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing thier undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below show what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing thier undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The two pictures illustrate the destination of Anthropology
graduates
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 after finishing their education at one university and the salaries of Anthropologists after 5 years of
work
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 in several types of employment.
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, the most activity that the
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 did was full-time
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, and the biggest fee that they received after 5 years was more than $100.000. The first picture shows the most purposes of the Anthropology
graduates
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 are full-time
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 at 53% followed by part-time
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 and unemployed at 15% and 12% respectively. Other destinations were full-time post-grad study (8%), not known (8%), and part-time
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+postgrad study (5%) Turning to the second picture, the highest number of anthropology
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 who got the biggest salary (> $100.000) was in the government sector at 50% followed by freelance consultants and private companies at 40% and 30% successively. The rates of honour which were received by anthropologists were $25.000-$99.000, and it varied from 5% to 40% of workers.

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