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The two tables below show the exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia between 2007 and 2009. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two tables below show the exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia between 2007 and 2009. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The tables illustrate the
exchange
 of
students
 from
Europe
 universities to Australian universities and vice versa. The tables show the
exchange
 between 2007 and 2009. At first glance, it can clearly be seen that the highest
exchange
 from
Europe
 to Australia was in Germany in 2009,
while
 the lowest was in Germany in 2007.
On the other hand
, the highest
number
 of
students
 moving from Australian universities to
Europe
 was in France in 2009, but the lowest was in
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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 in 2009. First of all, in 2007, France reached 61
students
.
Eventually
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 the
number
 decreased to 60
students
. In Sweden, the
number
 started at 34 and ended at 42 in 2009.
According to
 the United Kingdom, the
number
 of
exchange
students
 was 31 in 2007.
Next,
it fell gradually to 26
students
.
Moreover
,
Germany
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German
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exchange
students
 jumped to 62
students
 in 2009 after reaching 27
students
 in 2007. After that,
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the Netherland
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Netherland
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Netherland'
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number
 of
students
 was the same from 2007 to 2009 which was 36
people
. By far, the
amount
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number
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 of
exchange
students
 from Australia to
Europe
 was 37
people
 during 2007 in France. The
number
 kept increasing sharply reaching 58
people
 in 2009.
Then
, in
Sweden
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,Sweden
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 the
number
 began at 33
people
 and dropped to 27
people
 by the end of 2009. In the United Kingdom, the
number
 of
students
 in 2007 and 2009 landed at 32 and 23
students
, respectively. In
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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, the
number
 reached 32 in 2007 and decreased the double in 2009.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 90%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words exchange, students, europe, number, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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