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The two tables below show the exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia between 2007 and 2009. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two tables below show the exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia between 2007 and 2009. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The tables illustrate the
exchange
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 of
students
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 from
Europe
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 universities to Australian universities and vice versa. The tables show the
exchange
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 between 2007 and 2009. At first glance, it can clearly be seen that the highest
exchange
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 from
Europe
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 to Australia was in Germany in 2009,
while
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 the lowest was in Germany in 2007.
On the other hand
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, the highest
number
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 of
students
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 moving from Australian universities to
Europe
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 was in France in 2009, but the lowest was in
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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 in 2009. First of all, in 2007, France reached 61
students
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.
Eventually
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,Eventually
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 the
number
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 decreased to 60
students
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. In Sweden, the
number
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 started at 34 and ended at 42 in 2009.
According to
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 the United Kingdom, the
number
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 of
exchange
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students
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 was 31 in 2007.
Next,
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it fell gradually to 26
students
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.
Moreover
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,
Germany
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German
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exchange
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students
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 jumped to 62
students
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 in 2009 after reaching 27
students
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 in 2007. After that,
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the Netherland
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Netherland
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Netherland'
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number
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 of
students
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 was the same from 2007 to 2009 which was 36
people
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. By far, the
amount
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number
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 of
exchange
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students
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 from Australia to
Europe
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 was 37
people
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 during 2007 in France. The
number
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 kept increasing sharply reaching 58
people
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 in 2009.
Then
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, in
Sweden
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,Sweden
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 the
number
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 began at 33
people
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 and dropped to 27
people
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 by the end of 2009. In the United Kingdom, the
number
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 of
students
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 in 2007 and 2009 landed at 32 and 23
students
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, respectively. In
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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, the
number
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 reached 32 in 2007 and decreased the double in 2009.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 90%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words exchange, students, europe, number, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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