The chart illustrates the process of how waste papers are recycled.

The chart illustrates the process of how waste papers are recycled.
The chart illustrates the
process
of how waste
papers
are recycled.
Overall
, there are six steps
of
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the
process
, starting from collecting unused
paper
and ending
at
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manufacturing by machine. The first stage in the
process
is collecting the waste
papers
. They can be picked from public
paper
banks and from businesses, where many unused
papers
are produced. Next stage,
papers
are arranged by hand to check
the
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quality and the unsuitable ones are removed. After that, sorted
papers
will be shipped to the factory. At the factory, the
paper
will go through three stages before becoming the finished product. The
papers
are cleaned clearly in order to
purrify
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purify
materials
such
as staples,
tapes
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.
Then
, they removed residual ink and glue before reaching the final steps of the
process
. Through all the above stages, the
paper
will be put into a specialized machine to be manufactured into a usable product.
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