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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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According to
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 some, there is no
reason
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 for learning a new
language
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 unless you want to work or travel to that foreign country.
while
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 some
people
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, including me, think there are other reasons for acquiring a foreign
language
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.
although
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, some
people
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 believe that there is no
reason
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 to waste your time learning a
language
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 that you don't need to because it is like doing something useless.
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, imagine you have learned
Korean
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 for many years and now you want to travel and work in America. but, I would argue that
People
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 have the ability to learn several languages. another
reason
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 is that it is expensive to learn a new
language
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 it would cost too much to go to class and buy textbooks. so, it is wasting money when you don't have any precious
reason
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 for acquiring that
language
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.
however
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, I believe
people
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 can learn a
language
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 thanks to technology with less money. Nowadays, we have several apps that might help us learn a new
language
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.
On the other hand
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, I believe you can communicate with foreigners by learning a foreign
language
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. you would understand them better when you have learned their
language
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.
for example
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, I have some
Korean
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 friends whom I made friends with them when I was keen on
Korean
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 dramas and learned the
Korean
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language
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. so, we can say learning a new
language
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 is a way to communicate.
in addition
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 , acquiring a new
language
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 can improve
brain
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 function. Learning a foreign
language
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 has some valuable impacts on your
brain
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 health and general cognitive function. to say, you can prevent your
brain
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 to get older by learning and giving your
brain
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 a new
language
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 to practice and engage with. in conclusion, I believe there are several reasons why someone would learn a new
language
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. as
this
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 can improve your
brain
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 function and has a great effect on your communication with foreigners.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multilingual
  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
  • life-changing
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