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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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In today's contemporary world, there are contrasting views where
one
 part of society believes that some citizens are having
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talents
 like in sports and music.
While
other's
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others
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 are of the mindset that any adolescent can master a
talent
 if given
a
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proper guidance.
This
 essay will elucidate both the
view points
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follwed
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followed
 by my opinion in detail in the ensuing paragraphs. To commence with,there are certain
people
 who are
borned
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born
bored
 with
a
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talents
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talents
 like music and sports but the
talent
 is useful only if it has
a
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 right direction.
In other words
 , humans with
a
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god gifted
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talents
 astonish everyone around
and
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them and
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 are immensely good at it and once they are given
a ways
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ways
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 they will ace it no matter what.
For instance
,there is a famous player of
Indian
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the Indian
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 cricket team,and he was
god
 gifted with
this
talent
and
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luckily he
recieved
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received
 a great mentor for
the
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guidance and today he is known as the legend of
Indian
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 Cricket Team.
Hence
,the above example vividly illustrates
that
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why some
people
 believe that only
handful
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 amount of
people
 are born with
talents
 and others are not.
On the contrary
,It is a sure thing that
one
 can inculcate a
talent
 in themselves but
they
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 will have
work
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 very hard to ace it.To expound , nothing is impossible for anyone if
one
 is
desparate
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desperate
 to get that , but the only thing that halts is the
hardwork
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hard work
 followed by
great
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 teacher.To exemplify , there is
player
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a player
the player
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 in Indian Cricket Team , he was not born with a
talent
 but he wanted to play for India
desparately
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desperately
therefore
 he worked day and night to
accuire
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acquire
 that.
Thus
,the aforementioned reason substantiates why some
people
 believe that any skill can be taught to do great. To recapitulate ,
this
 essay clearly discussed that
people
are
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 born with
talents
do
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 great ,
while
 in other
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cases
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people
 may
also
 do great if they are being taught.From my point of view,
people
 should not judge
one
 on the basis of their
god
 gifted
talents
 , everyone should train themselves for
the
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the the thing they want and as it is said hard work pays off , someday or the other they will surely achieve heights.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Innate talent
  • Nurture
  • Prodigy
  • Proficiency
  • Deliberate practice
  • Physiological factors
  • Grit
  • Perseverance
  • Cultural norms
  • Structured training
  • Physical predisposition
  • Natural aptitude
  • Dedicated training
  • Societal influence
  • Passion
  • Genetic endowment
  • Skill acquisition
  • Expertise
  • Extracurricular activities
  • Mastery
  • Cognitive abilities
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