The Table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 Scottish adults (aged 16 years and over) whether they had taken part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table provides information
of
participation in a variety of cultural activities over a year based on the age of participants of 6800 Scottish adults.
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Overall
, any performance includes
singing, dancing, Correct pronoun usage
that includes
playing
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and playing
muscal
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musical
instrument
has the highest number of participantFix the agreement mistake
instruments
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