You left a jacket behind at a restaurant you went to recently. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter describe the jacket explain when you visited the restaurant and where you were sitting say what you want the manager to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to let you know that I left my jacket at your restaurant on my recent visit.
It is a blue colour denim jacket with two pockets on each side
along with
a zip in it and a green colour ripped collar.
Recently on 1st May, I visited your ABC hotel for a get-together along with
my three friends; besides
, we had a great evening and a delicious dinner at your restaurant. We four of us were gathered and sitting at the third table from the left of the entrance, unfortunately, I got an emergency call and when I urge
myself into that situation, I left my coat on the table.
Would you kindly collect my jacket and have it in your cabin? Preferably, I will obtain it tomorrow when I arrive for a meeting which is next to your place. could you please inform your colleagues in case of your absence?
I hope you will consider my request and thank you for helping me.
Yours faithfully,
JenWrong verb form
urged
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task response
The letter effectively responds to the task and includes all the required information. However, be mindful of using clearer and more concise language.
coherence and cohesion
The letter demonstrates good coherence and cohesion, with clear paragraph organization. However, pay attention to using more formal and appropriate language for the greeting and closing.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite