You live close to a restaurant and have recently been disturbed by the noise coming from the restaurant in the evenings. Write a letter to the owner of the restaurant. In your letter ● explain why you find the noise disturbing ● suggest a way to solve the problem ● explain what you will do if the problem is not solved

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Hello Sir or Madam I am writing to complain about your restaurant of noise disturbing.

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live near your restaurant. When

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was sleeping at night so

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difficult

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to sleep

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said me more sleep at night. But

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do not sleep so

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problem because

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appointment. I suggest to your restaurant work's time shortage. I recommend you kindly arrange for noise disturbing. I expect you

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as soon as possible because

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our living.

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faithfully, Aziza Ro'zimurodova.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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6 paragraphs

103 words

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