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You live close to a restaurant and have recently been disturbed by the noise coming from the restaurant in the evenings. Write a letter to the owner of the restaurant. In your letter ● explain why you find the noise disturbing ● suggest a way to solve the problem ● explain what you will do if the problem is not solved

#restaurant #noise #evenings #owner
Hello Sir or Madam I am writing to complain about your restaurant of noise disturbing.
l
 live near your restaurant. When
l
 was sleeping at night so
l
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had difficult
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difficult
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difficulty
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to sleep
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then
l
 have
headache
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a headache
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. I went to
hospital
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the hospital
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 yesterday so
doctor
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the doctor
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 said me more sleep at night. But
l
 do not sleep so
l
 request to look
this
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 problem because
l
 do not
want
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 move
another
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 appointment. I suggest to your restaurant work's time shortage. I recommend you kindly arrange for noise disturbing. I expect you
action
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 on
this
 as soon as possible because
this
 problem
effecting
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 our living.
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Your
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 faithfully, Aziza Ro'zimurodova.
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

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