Today many couples decide not to have children. There are certain advantages and disadvantages to this. Give 3 avantages and 3 disadvantages of having children.

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choose to have no

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there will be advantages and disadvantages,

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essay will discuss both sides. There are numerous advantages of having no

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, financially speaking, income will be consumed by two

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only, without any additional expenses

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children

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’s school tuition and medical bills.

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couples

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can save a good amount of money and have a lot of fun trips. Around the world.

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a big chance for investment to secure a remarkable retirement plan.

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less responsibility as the only thing to worry about is the other adult partner without any attachment.

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having the freedom of reallocation,

couples

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can change their

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plans without any consideration , As an example they can change their home location, city, and maybe country easily without having any restrictions.

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choose not to have

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will face loneliness and boredom, because they will live by themselves with no one

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look after them which may cause some mental

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as anxiety and depression.

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, other health issues like breast cancer, as a female, breastfeeding

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breast cancer.

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, several illnesses require a relative blood or organ donation, and by having no

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no relatives will be available for donations. Not only that,

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decision will discontinue the family tree. All the family histories and

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will no longer continue. In conclusion, nowadays many

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couples

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choose not to have

children

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, and every decision has

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advantage

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and disadvantages.

dr.yushiMon May 22 2023

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Today many couples decide not to have children. There are certain advantages and disadvantages to this. Give 3 avantages and 3 disadvantages of having children.

Your opinion

The population of major cities around the world is increasing very fastly. Why is this the case and what measures could be taken to solve this issue.

Nowaday, it is common to have marriage and children in their thirties rather than in younger age. What is cause behind this? Is this a positive or negative trend?

Some people say that all people should stay in full-time education until they are at least 18. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many goverments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other type of progress are equally important for a country Discuss both views and give your own opinion.