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The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment

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The maps depict the design of a
university
's
sports
centre
 presently and the future
plan
 after renovation.
Overall
, it is evident that the
university
's
sports
centre
's present look will be improved after the building of some structures and redesign in the future.
To begin
, in the present structure of the
university
sports
centre
 entering through the entrance is the reception for enquiries and at the left side is the changing room and
also
 a seating area for the students located at the east of the
plan
.
However
,
at the end
 of the building are the gym and outdoor courts located at the west and east of the
sports
centre
 in the
university
 with a 25m wide pool at the
centre
.
Furthermore
, in the future is an expansion of the building in which a
sports
 shop will be built at the southwest and a cafe at the right with more changing rooms located at the left and right-hand corner of the
plan
.
Also
, a leisure pool will be built where the outdoor court at the west used to be for students during their free time to swim and two dance studios at the northeast of the
plan
 with the
sports
 hall beside the seating area for students.
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