Your parents will be celebrating their 40th anniversary next month. You are planning a big celebration, but you are not sure how to make the occasion really memorable. Write to your best friend, Joan, who is a professional event planner. In your letter:

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Dear Joan, After a long ,time I am talking

with

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you I hope you and your family are well, I am writing

this

letter to inform you or invite you

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month 14th June I am celebrating

40th

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anniversary of my parent I wanted some advice from your side could you please advise me on

this

that will be really helpful for me. I am planning to do a big celebration at

this

party but I am a little bit confused, I am inviting my all relative

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my parents' family friends or office staff

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but I

wanted

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to do some special that they can't imagine. I have decided Bollywood theme all guests should

ware

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cloth

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as per the theme If you have any other better ideas about

this

party please let me know how we can plan

this

celebration should be memorable for my parents. I

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really appreciate you if you see my

latter

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please reactivate me on

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as soon as possible so we can start

planing

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. Best Regards, Akanksha

Submitted by t.akanksha.mba on Mon May 22 2023

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

174 words

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