The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shop that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shop that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart depicts the
number
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of shops which closed or newly opened in a country during the period between 2011 and 2018.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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both closures and openings had a downward trend in the period
as well as
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the total
number
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of shops in the country. There was a significant decline in the new stores in the 7 years. The figure, which accounted for approximately 8500 in 2011 got less than half in one year before recovering to around 6000 in 2014. With the drop to about 4000 in 2015, the
number
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surpassed the
number
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of closed stores. From 2015,
this
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steadily remained after which it decreased by 1000 in the
last
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year to reach 3000.
Furthermore
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, the
number
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of closed shops
also
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experienced a decreasing trend.
This
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started at approximately 6300 in 2011 and
then
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slightly declined to just 6000 in 2012 before rocketing to over 7000 which means was the biggest in the period. Even though
this
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noticeably plummeted to less than 1000 in 2015, it reached a high of about 5000
in
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the next year.
This
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figure stabilized in the
last
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two years.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • peak
  • decline
  • fluctuation
  • correlation
  • inverse relationship
  • notable
  • comparable
  • speculate
  • external factors
  • increment
  • decrement
  • overall
  • composite
  • linear
  • net gain
  • net loss
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