You are going to an English Speaking country for some months. Write a letter to the rental agency. In your letter. 1. the type of house you want 2. facilities you require 3. for how long you need the accomodation

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to seek a housing accommodation through your rental agency in London. I received your reference from one of your past clients who actually was my colleague and urged me to go forward with you when booking my stay in London because of the service. I am in search of

the

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one-bedroom rental apartment with a full bath, as I will be the only one travelling for my work trip. Let me explain the facilities I need in detail.

Firstly

, it should contain all the kitchen appliances like a gas stove, dishwasher, and in-house laundry facilities as I will be mostly cooking at home.

Moreover

, as I will be attending in the summer, it should have a fully-functional air conditioning system. As

this

will be my first trip ever to London, I will be getting a car for my travel and work purposes and

hence

, will be needing the parking facilities for the same during my period of stay. I am looking for

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accommodation for a period of six months starting from 15th May 2023. I hope you have an empty apartment meeting all the above-stated requirements starting in May. Kindly acknowledge my request with the availability or alternative availability as I want my stay to be confirmed and booked as earliest as possible in order to avoid the

last

-minute rush. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Faithfully Harsh

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You are going to an English Speaking country for some months. Write a letter to the rental agency. In your letter. 1. the type of house you want 2. facilities you require 3. for how long you need the accomodation

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in many societies, there is a growing emphasis on individualism, with people prioritizing their personal goals and desires over collective interests. Is this a positive or negative development?

Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.