the bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010

the bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010
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The given diagram provides information about the population of citizens in
Australia
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and outside
Australia
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living in different zones between 1995 and 2010.
Overall
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, the quantity of Australians and
non-Australians
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residing in urban areas dominated the highest number for 5 years. Meanwhile, both categories of people living in rural regions and towns had fluctuation over the years,
however
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, the number of
non-Australians
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living in townships was eventually higher than the number of residents living in rural areas. In 1995, the population of Australians living in urban regions accounted for approximately 50% as opposed to exactly 60% of
non-Australians
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living in the same regions. The proportion of people born in
Australia
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’s countryside was greater than the same type of residents in towns, about 30% and 20% approximately.
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, the figures for
non-Australians
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living in township and rural zones were totally contradictory to each other because it is ranging between 10% and 40%. After 5 years, the percentage of Australian residents living in towns and the countryside remained at the same rate but the population of citizens born outside
Australia
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living in the metropolis was higher than in rural land, 10% and 5%.
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, both categories of dwellers living in
Australia
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still dominated the highest figures.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words australia, non-australians with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • demographics
  • urbanization
  • migration patterns
  • population distribution
  • percentage points
  • growth rate
  • decline
  • trend analysis
  • socioeconomic factors
  • infrastructure development
  • rural exodus
  • census data
  • lifestyle changes
  • residential patterns
  • immigration policies
  • emigration
  • natural increase
  • birth rate
  • settlement patterns
  • push and pull factors
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