The diagram shows the process of milk production
The process diagram illustrates the steps involved in
production
of Add an article
the production
milk
Overall
, it can be seen that,
the steps by steps approach is divided into 8 categories. Starting from cows grazing to its retail to Remove the comma
apply
final
consumer in the supermarkets.
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the final
Firstly
, the cow are
allowed to graze on the farm which is Change the verb form
is
then
followed by a twice daily procedures
of Correct the article-noun agreement
twice daily procedures
a twice daily procedure
milk
out their Wrong verb form
milking
milk
by the milking machine, then
the milk
is stored in a refrigerator where its
Replace the word
it's
it is
then
transported in a milk
tanker daily to the diary.
Further
, from the diary, the delivered milk
is then
pasteurized and packaged , some are made into cheese,cream and butter which will be finally
delivered into
the supermarkets and shops for sale by the final consumerChange preposition
to
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