The diagram shows the process by which milk-related products are produced. Summarise the information by selecting the main features. Write at least 150 word.

The diagram shows the process by which milk-related products are produced. 

Summarise the information by selecting the main features. Write at least 150 word.
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The diagram reveals how
milk
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and similar products are being produced in various phases and
this
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involves 8 phases from the cow in the farm till the
milk
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is extracted and packaged till it gets to the final consumer.
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, there are different laps of cream production both on the farm and factory. these stages are 8. The cream and buttermilk products are extracted from the cows after being well-fed on the farm, and the milking is done by extracting
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milk
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through milking machines every day they are
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stored in the refrigerator at a normal temperature and
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transferred to the dairy section through the half-and-half tanker whereby delivery is done daily.
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, Milky in the diary section is
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converted into different products
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as cheese, cream, and butter after pasteurization and packaging in the factory and later sent to various supermarkets and shops for sale to the final consumers.
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, the production of
milk
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and
and
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other outcomes are achieved through the extraction of paste to pasteurization and packaging till the distribution to supermarkets and shops.
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