The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features. Write at least 150 words.
The process diagram illustrates the various stages involved in the production of
milk
and its varieties.
Overall
, it is evident that eight stages in the formation of a diary, starting with some steps in the open field and the rest in the industry.
To begin
, cows are allowed to graze on farms before it is being milked by milking equipment two times daily, the substance gotten is then
stored in the refrigerator to avoid spoilage, and afterwards
a van is used especially to transport Add a comma
,afterwards
milk
to the factory.
Moving to the industry, the milk
is placed in the diary section here milk
undergoes processing in huge containers leading under a wide range of conditions which produces finished items like cheese, cream and butter which are readily consumed by adults, children and even animals, next milk
is pasteurized within a particular temperature range and arranged into smaller bottles. Finally
, they are arranged in racks in malls and shop for sales.Submitted by oludayotemilade on
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