The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

Write at least 150 words.
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The process diagram illustrates the various stages involved in the production of
milk
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and its varieties.
Overall
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, it is evident that eight stages in the formation of a diary, starting with some steps in the open field and the rest in the industry.
To begin
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, cows are allowed to graze on farms before it is being milked by milking equipment two times daily, the substance gotten is
then
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stored in the refrigerator to avoid spoilage, and
afterwards
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a van is used especially to transport
milk
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to the factory. Moving to the industry, the
milk
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is placed in the diary section here
milk
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undergoes processing in huge containers leading under a wide range of conditions which produces finished items like cheese, cream and butter which are readily consumed by adults, children and even animals, next
milk
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is pasteurized within a particular temperature range and arranged into smaller bottles.
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, they are arranged in racks in malls and shop for sales.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words milk with synonyms.
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