The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The diagram above depicts the process by which
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milk related
goods are manufactured, processed and sold to the public.
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milk-related
Overall
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process
illustrated in the diagram , starting from the cow's feeding on the grass to produce Change to a plural noun
processes
milk
to be stored in the refrigerator for preservation and later transported to the diary.
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Thereafter
, the Linking Words
milk
is processed in the diary into various forms, like cheese, cream and butter. Use synonyms
Meanwhile
some are still left as Add a comma
,Meanwhile
milk
to be pasteurized for presentation and Use synonyms
then
packaged.
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Finally
, the goods are ready after several processing and packaging to be dispensed and sold out to shops , Linking Words
supermarket
and Fix the agreement mistake
supermarkets
to
the public.Change preposition
apply
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Vocabulary: Replace the words milk with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
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