The diagram shoes the process by which milk and related products are produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The diagram shoes the process by which milk and related products are produced.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The diagram illustrates how
diary
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dairy
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products
are processed, produced, packaged and sold in
the
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supermarkets and shops for our consumption.
Overall
,
according to
the
diagram
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there are eight stages, beginning with cows grazing on
a
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farm land
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and ending in the sales of the
products
.
Milk
is been extracted from the cows with the use of a milking machine twice a day, and
then
stored in the refrigerator for a
while
. The refrigerated
milk
is been transported through a tanker to the
refininery
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refinery
. More
diary
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products
are been produced
such
as
,
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cheese, cream, butter and
milk
. The
milk
is
then
pasteurised and packaged into containers. The packaged
products
are sent to different shops and supermarkets for purchase and human consumption.
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