The diagram shoes the process by which milk and related products are produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The diagram illustrates how
diary
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dairy
products
are processed, produced, packaged and sold in Use synonyms
the
supermarkets and shops for our consumption.
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Overall
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according to
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diagram
there are eight stages, beginning with cows grazing on Add a comma
,diagram
a
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farm land
and ending in the sales of the Correct your spelling
farmland
products
. Use synonyms
Milk
is been extracted from the cows with the use of a milking machine twice a day, and Use synonyms
then
stored in the refrigerator for a Linking Words
while
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The refrigerated Linking Words
milk
is been transported through a tanker to the Use synonyms
refininery
. More Correct your spelling
refinery
diary
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dairy
products
are been produced Use synonyms
such
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,
cheese, cream, butter and Remove the comma
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milk
. The Use synonyms
milk
is Use synonyms
then
pasteurised and packaged into containers.
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products
are sent to different shops and supermarkets for purchase and human consumption.Use synonyms
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