You are a foreign student. You want to join the club or society so that you can enjoy your time when you study there. Write to the student union manager. in your letter Introduce yourself Write about your hobbies and interests Ask for information about clubs and societies

Dear Sir, I’m Harsh Patel, an international
student
currently pursuing
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in industrial engineering. It has already been three months since the day I landed in the United States of America, and excited for the wonderful and fascinating years ahead, by getting to know the culture and practices.
Hence
, I am writing
this
letter to get the guidance for the same. My hobbies consist of drawing and going out
for
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hiking or trails, combined with a strong passion for physical sports. I am a sportsperson who enjoys playing competitive table tennis and soccer. I enjoy being with new people and making friends. At times, even though I might not have enough time for recreational activities, still I am able to plan my day
accordingly
and go out with friends. Would you kindly advise me few active hiking and cultural clubs in the university, which I can be a part of, to enhance my
student
group in
this
foreign land
.
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Also
, being an industrial engineering
student
, I would like to join the IISE
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which actively works in uplifting
the
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student
knowledge based on current market trends. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Harsh
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foreign student
  • enroll
  • student union manager
  • hobbies
  • interests
  • clubs and societies
  • join
  • enjoy
  • recreational pursuits
  • identify
  • activities
  • range
  • available
  • meeting schedules
  • membership fees
  • informed choice
  • eagerness to get involved
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