The bar chart shows the percentage of people who have moved house either in last 3 years,between 3years to 5 years,not within the last 5 years
The bar graph illustrates the proportion of moving, depending on personal ages and living period
on
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in
thier
houses. The Correct your spelling
their
the
age
divided four
groups which were 20 to 29, 30 to 39, 40 to 49 and over 50 Change preposition
into four
years
old. In addition
, the term of living Change preposition
in thier
thier
homes Correct your spelling
their
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were seperated
seperated
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separated
three
periods, moved Change preposition
into three
house
3 to 5 years
ago, in the last
3 years
and not moved house
in the last
5 years
.
Overall
, the group
of
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apply
moved
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the moved
a moved
house
between 3 to 5 years
ago ranked the higest
proportion at the Correct your spelling
highest
age
of 40 generations. As other age
groups except over 50 years
showed the least percentage on
not moving during 5 Change preposition
of
years
, while
in over 50 ages, the biggest occupied per cent
would be a not moving group
.
To compare in the view of age
, except over
50 Correct article usage
the over
years
old group
, the per cent
of people who moved houses between 3 to 5 years
occupied the most proportions on their each
Change the determiner
every
age
and the highest was over 40 under 49 years
old group
, it was 55 per cent
. The secondest
category was the Correct your spelling
second
group
of moved house
within 3 years
. It was ranked the highest in 20
to 29 Correct article usage
the 20
age
group
, resulted
in 33 per Wrong verb form
resulting
cent
. Not moving group
within 5 years
were
the Change the verb form
was
higest
in Correct your spelling
highest
over
50 Correct article usage
the over
years
old group
, resulted
in 42% Wrong verb form
resulting
while
lowest
was 14% in the Correct article usage
the lowest
age
of 40 to 49.
To see all age
groups, moving the
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apply
house
from 3 to 5 years
were
high in each Correct subject-verb agreement
was
group
, however
, in elderly
Add an article
the elderly
group
, the
most did not move in the Correct article usage
apply
last
5 years
.Submitted by nursemk1991 on
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