In number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sum of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Other believe the money should spend on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
In
this
era, people have been becoming dependent on vehicles more and more with time. It has become a vital need of human beings. Many individuals claim to spend huge amounts of income on building the new advanced railway stations and rials to connect various cities while
some people think authorities should focus on making the existing transport
more advanced. Personally, both
ideas are good and our governments need to improve both
of the transport
. On the one hand, advanced technology should be adopted because it will have the latest features such
as new medical instruments which could cure and identify numerous diseases better than classical tools. Other than that, when the latest transport
system
would be implicated in different areas, the problem of time could be solved and the latest trains such
as bullet train has many functions which could improve the travel
experience. Furthermore
, resources could be saved when a lot of individuals travel
in one vehicle. During making the policies about the new system
of transport
, the necessities of the poor public should be kept in mind because, in this
way, they will be able to save their money.
On the other hand
, it is believed that the projects should base on improving the already build transport
system
. It would keep the economy balanced and governments do not need to spend so much money on new projects. Furthermore
, this
system
is also
helpful in emergency situations. For example
, in India, Pakistan, Iran, and in some other countries, sometimes, an ambulance is not available. Therefore
, most of the time, individuals use local transport
for transferring the patient to nearby hospitals. To conclude
, both
types of system
are important but the construction of the railway is more beneficial for both
governments and the public because the poor could travel
at a low cost and that money will submit to the country's account but public transport
also
has very benefits. For instance
, people can travel
whenever and wherever they want.Submitted by alizaryab78691011 on
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