The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
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The given line graph illustrates information about transported goods to the UK from 1974 to 2002 by four various modes of transport. From the figure, it can be seen that throughout the period road transportation and water transportation carried more luggage than pipelines and rails.
According to
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the given data, in 1974, large tonnes of furnishings were delivered to the UK by road
while
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around two-fifths sum tonnes of products were carried by water and rail transport. The least quantity of supplies (around 5 lot tonnes ) was transported in pipelines in
this
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same year. Over the year, the figure for road shipment rose with some fluctuations and reached about 100 thousand tons in 2002.
Moreover
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, the number of goods transported by waterways kept on increasing and
finally
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reached over 60 bank tons in 2002.
According to
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rail carrying, declined with fluctuations over the given time period and reached 40 thousand oodles in 2002.
Finally
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, property carried by pipelines increased over the year reaching over fifth
total
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tons in 2002.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Transported goods
  • Quantities
  • Trends
  • Modes of transport
  • Rail
  • Road
  • Water
  • Pipeline
  • Fluctuations
  • Predominance
  • Economic influences
  • Societal changes
  • Technological advancements
  • Environmental impact
  • Growth
  • Steady increase/decrease
  • Comparison
  • Period (e.g., decade, years)
  • Examination
  • Implications
  • Analysis
  • Conclusion
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