Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There is no doubt that these days developing counties are suffering from
poverty
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and lack of necessities of life, and developed
countries
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are trying to help developing
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to
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tackle
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with
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financial aid. The question is, what overcomes
poverty
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? What kinds of help are required for developing
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in order to be developed
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? In
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essay, I am going to discuss both views and draw my personal conclusion. In terms of the first side of view, people who believed that
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is the solution to
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, and providing money people can eat healthy food that keeps them in
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good health with no disease.
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, it was found in one research paper that 75% of disorders
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developing
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are
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polluted water, and 37%
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of a variety of food
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.
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, money provides for them the necessities to be far away from
poverty
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.
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, financial aid does not solve the problem at the root. It keeps them in
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cycle of need over time.
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, utilize the natural
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of their country.
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, education is key to fighting
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.
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, educational citizens can plan to invest the natural
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with economic strategies that will rise
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the country's
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economy and
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will increase the gross domestic product per person. In conclusion, the solution is not only about money. In my opinion, developing counties highly need well-established educational programs for a wide range of ages to make
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sufficient use of their natural
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, and
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those
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eliminate the problem of
poverty
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with effective solutions.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • poverty alleviation
  • economic inequality
  • developing nations
  • foreign aid
  • sustainable growth
  • technical assistance
  • expertise
  • infrastructure
  • education
  • fair trade
  • trade barriers
  • sustainable development
  • environmental conservation
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