The chart below shows the total number of minutes of telephone calls in the UK , divided into three categories, from 1995 to 2002.

The chart below shows the total number of minutes of telephone calls in the UK , divided into three categories, from 1995 to 2002.
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The bar chart illustrates the total
number
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of
minutes
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of mobile phone calls in the UK by three types for over 7
years
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.
Overall
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, it can be seen that over the
years
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local-fixed line had the highest
number
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of
minutes
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calls
whereas
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the lowest is the
mobiles
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mobile
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(all calls).
To begin
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, the local-fixed line had the highest
number
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of
minutes
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of calls over the
years
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but experienced a significant increase to 90
billion
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in 1999 and a dramatic fall to just above 70
billion
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calls in 2002.
However
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, the national and international- fixed line had a steady rise of minute calls throughout the
years
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from just under 40
billion
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in 1995 to over 60
billion
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in 2002.
In contrast
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, mobiles (all calls) had the lowest
number
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of
minutes
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calls and a dramatic increase from approximately 2
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which is the lowest compared to other call types, to over 40
billion
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minutes
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in 2002. Meanwhile, with the increase in mobile (all calls) it still remains the lowest call type used over the period of 7
years
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, minutes, years, billion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • telecommunications
  • landline
  • mobile phone
  • long-distance
  • international call
  • local call
  • peak
  • plateau
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • fluctuation
  • steady
  • dramatically
  • gradually
  • significantly
  • minute
  • usage
  • tariff
  • call charges
  • call volume
  • shift in preferences
  • consumer behavior
  • technological advancement
  • speculate
  • projection
  • statistical data
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