You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this . You should write at least 250 words.

Over decades, there has been a belief that adults should support adolescents to

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in a company or travel to another country

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least one year before going to

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. Despite the fact that there are many positive aspects of having

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in terms of working and travelling before studying at

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, with

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careful consideration, there are

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negative points of

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. It is true that working or travelling before starting a

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program positively affects

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’ development. A classic example of

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is an effective way to truly understand their academic preferences. When

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have

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experiences

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,

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as having a one-year internship in a company, they tend to learn a wide variety of

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functions, helping them know the academic discipline they want to learn at

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. Another benefit

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taking a long journey to another place before studying at

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is the opportunity to get exposed to

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culture.

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adolescents are on an epic expedition to other parts of the world, they tend to meet new people with different

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and

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, leading to valuable life

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that they cannot receive from a professor at

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. In spite of the aforementioned advantages of working or travelling before starting

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courses, there are

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drawbacks. A common example of

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is graduating from

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college late, compared to

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who immediately start a

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program after they finish high school.

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is exemplified by Thai culture which believes that young people who graduate from

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later than their

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would not have a successful career path.

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notion might argue that working before finishing

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is not well worth doing. Since most works require a strong academic foundation in order for

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to deliver results with fewer mistakes, the

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should study at

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instead

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. In conclusion, it is undeniable that having

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experiences

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or taking a journey before starting a

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life has many benefits for young people with respect to knowing the academic fields they want to study and learning new cultures outside a classroom.

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, doing

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could

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have drawbacks in terms of the delay in

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graduation and

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ineffective performance in working.