you are taking a course at a local college. the deadline for your project was last week but you have not finished it. write a letter to your teacher. in your letter introduce yourself. explain why you have not handed in the project yet. request more time to do it.

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Dear Mr Ahmadi, My name is Amir and I am one of the students in your history class. About two weeks ago you asked us to provide a project on the history of France.

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I started the project immediately and dedicated all my time and effort in order to accomplish it on time, I could not manage to get it done. The reason is that for

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title, I have to read the French resources. As I am not completely fluent in French, it was impossible to write my essay within a week. If it is possible, I want you to give me extra time so that I can revise my assignment. I know that I have already missed the deadline, but I have tried hard for the project ,and I believe the result would be beneficial for my classmates. I would like to thank you in advance for considering my situation. Sincerely yours Amir Ghasemi

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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6 paragraphs

157 words

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you are taking a course at a local college. the deadline for your project was last week but you have not finished it. write a letter to your teacher. in your letter introduce yourself. explain why you have not handed in the project yet. request more time to do it.

Many countries have compulsory military service for young men after they leave school. It would be a good idea for all countries to adopt this system for men, and possibly for women too. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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In many countries large amounts of foods are wasted. Why do you think people waste food in this way? What can be done to reduce the amount of food thrown away?

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Many museums charge for the entries while others are free. Do you think the advantage of charging people for admission for museum outweigh its disadvantages.