you are taking a course at a local college. the deadline for your project was last week but you have not finished it. write a letter to your teacher. in your letter introduce yourself. explain why you have not handed in the project yet. request more time to do it.

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Lora, I'm writing
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letter to express you about the project,which you gave us to complete before the 18th of October. I'm Karina Kulasooriya, a student in the 3rd-year art department.
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the topics you gave us, I followed all of them and ,actually I should have finished them but unfortunately
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moment I saw one part of my assignment has incomplete was my fault. I left some free space to get real clues from the witness of the murder case.
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week I went to meet that particular person and he left his place
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an unknown area.
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no one knows about his current area.
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is the phenomenon that actually happened. I bind those papers and it is impossible to remove these pages from the project, even though gives me a few days to consider the incident I faced with. Hope you understand
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circumstance and give me some extra dates. yours faithfully, Katrina
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