Some people believe that the only purposes of film is to entertain. Others say films should have educational value. Discuss both views and give own opinion.

Over the past few decades, there is a significant change happened in the Visual
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. It is a public opinion that-, watching a movie is only for entertainment
purpose
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.
while
other says that, cinema gives
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value
for
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studies. I strongly agree with the
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statement.
Films
is
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not only for entertainment but
also
give valuable information.
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Therefore
,
following
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this
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will discuss both views and my view and reach
proper
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a proper
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conclusion. In the modern world,
Films
plays
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an important role in
the
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humans
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human
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life. It can easily
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the
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society, in both good and bad ways. Once a
flim
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film
watched by a person, he or she will
be never forget
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the story of the film. Because
,
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almost all people like to watch
cinema
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the cinema
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. So if we are doing something with
interset
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interest
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that will give a result.
For instance
,
according to
the survey
conduted
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conducted
by
educational
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the educational
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department in the year 2018. Pupils studying with
textbook
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textbooks
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have
high
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a high
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chance of forgetting what they studied.
whereas
,
student
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the student
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is
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studying their subjects with the help of some apps or other visual sources like
Bijus
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app, can easily understand the subjects.
Although
,
the
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visual media
also
help to increase our memory.
Furthermore
, Nowadays, most of the
films
gives
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a moral story and
also
will give fun to the society but sometimes it badly affect the society
especially
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,especially
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on youngsters.
For example
, Some teenagers madly follow their superstars in
the
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films
. If the hero
acting
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to have some drugs in the film for showing heroism.
Consequently
, the fans of the superstar do the same activities for showoff.
As a result
, their future will spoil.
To conclude
, everything
have
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positive and negative sides. In the modern era, only a few people are misusing
this
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these
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films
rest
all
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are considering
films
as
a
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entertainemt
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entertainment
and knowledge
source
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sources
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. In future, we will see the vast applications of the
films
. That will give both fun and information to the human
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beings
beigns
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beings
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