comparison of the sports centre now and after redevelopment

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The maps provide information on the sportsmanship
centre
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in a university and how they will look in the future after the reconstruction.
overall
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,the sportsmanship
centre
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will be larger and a lot of amenities will be added. There will be a larger gym,a huge leisure waterhole, more changing rooms,sports shops,a large play hall, a cafe for snacks and drinks,and
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double studios for dancing activities. As we look at the recent
centre
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map , the entrance is on the southern part of the building.when you pass through the door the greeting will be just in front of you. On both sides of the reception ,there are
two
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small doors the one on the left leads to the changing room , there are a lot of lockers and stoves if you want to change your clothes and enter the pool which is about 25m in length. Back to the right
side
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of the reception as you enter the building you can see a door that leads to the seats , you can have a seat and look toward the bath . On the west and east
side
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of the building, there are
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outdoor courts for open-air play like soccer .
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,you can find the gym in the north part of the building. The University plans to add some changes in the future.
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,The gate to the facility will remain at the same site. When you will pass the gate there will be a cafe on the right
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and a play shop to the left .
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receptionist will hold his position. When you pass the cafe just by walking on the right path you can find a changing room for the dancing studios . The
two
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dancing studios be placed beside each other on the west
side
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of the
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next to the sports halls .
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of
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,way you will find the gym door. Back to the main entrance and just beside the reception there will be
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entries,the one on the left leads to changing area of the pool and the second will lead to the seating sites .
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,there will be another changing place located just behind the sports shop,
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changing room will be available to members who want to enter the leisure pool . In conclusion, the building will be far different from now to accommodate the modern demands
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