The diagram below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the evolution process of a species of

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large fish called salmon.

Overall

, as we can see, there are 3 stages to

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process, beginning with

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and ending with laying

eggs

under the reeds in the upper river by the adult salmons.

To begin

with, the salmon

eggs

that were laid down among the reeds and tiny stones for approximately 5 or 6 months in the upper river where the flow of water is slow, hatch

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a small type of fish called 'Fry' which has

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-8 cm length.

Furthermore

, they are transferred to the lower stream where the water flow is rapid and stay there for about 4 years to evolve into the second type which is known as 'Smolt'

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has 12-15 cm

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.

Next,

smolts find their way to the sea and accommodate there for almost 5 years to complete their evolution and turn into the third type called the 'adult salmon' which has the longest length, 70-76 cm. In the final stage, adult salmons return to the high-hand river and lay down a number of

eggs

in the reeds which oughts to stay there for around 5-6 months to launch the cycle again.