Writing Task 1: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, •explain why you changed jobs •describe your new job •tell him / her your other news

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Hi Lisa. How are you?I am fun.I have a lot of news for you.First I must tell you.
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changed my
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.Because my
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was very hard and my fee was very little.
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,it started at half past seven and finished at half past nine so
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could not do my other work.
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as
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could not do my home tasks so
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changed my
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. My new
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is very easy, comfortable.Because it starts at eight o'clock and finishes at six o'clock and
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take a lot of fees.After that my new company located near my flat so
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like my new
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. I remarked my
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is easy.
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have to supervise visitors.Becouse my new
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is turispolice. My other news is
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bought a new car and
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passed.
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, I take a certificate from a Russian university. Nice to meet you. Zarina.
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