The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.
The two maps illustrate the present site of the industrial environment of Norbiton and the proposed site for its future advancement.
Overall
, the major roads of the industrial area are surrounded by factories
presently whereas
they will be replaced with housing and roads in the future.
On the one hand, the current industrial environment of the town has farmland located toward the north side
and there is a big river behind it, Also
, the main roadway is situated in the southern part with a roundabout in the centre. Furthermore
, the central roundabout extended towards the east side
of the industry and factories
are built around it. The town on the west side
connected the river above and the road
below.
On the other hand
, the planned development of this
environment will have centre
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a centre
the centre
road
on the south side
connecting with the central road
in the middle. However
, shops and a medical centre will be built behind the central road
. Moreso, the factories
are replaced with playgrounds and schools on the east side
and a roadway will be constructed across the river to the farmland and other factories
would be replaced with houses.Submitted by oludayotemilade on
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