The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.
The two maps illustrate the present site of the industrial environment of Norbiton and the proposed site for its future advancement.
Overall
, the major roads of the industrial area are surrounded by
factories
presently
whereas
they will be replaced with housing and roads in the future. On the one hand, the current industrial environment of the town has farmland located toward the north
side
and there is a big river behind it,
Also
, the main roadway is situated in the southern part with a roundabout in the centre.
Furthermore
, the central roundabout extended towards the east
side
of the industry and
factories
are built around it. The town on the west
side
connected the river above and the
road
below.
On the other hand
, the planned development of
this
environment will have
centre
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road
on the south
side
connecting with the central
road
in the middle.
However
, shops and a medical centre will be built behind the central
road
. Moreso, the
factories
are replaced with playgrounds and schools on the east
side
and a roadway will be constructed across the river to the farmland and other
factories
would be replaced with houses.
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  • industrial area
  • development
  • infrastructure
  • manufacturing
  • facilities
  • transition
  • planning
  • commercial
  • residential
  • renovation
  • urban planning
  • sustainability
  • environmental impact
  • local economy
  • rejuvenation
  • construction
  • modernization
  • accessibility
  • demolition
  • gentrification
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