The maps below show the centre of a small twon called Islip is it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the centre of a small twon called Islip is it is now, and plans for its development.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pictures illustrate the city
centre
of Islip today and the future for its development.
Overall
, there are some modifications including addition and renovation in several facilities and infrastructures in a planned development. Nowadays, the northernmost of the map is the countryside, and some shops are situated in the north and the south of the main
road
. In the
centre
to the south of the maps, it can be seen a housing
area
. That location is
also
completed with a school in the west and a small park in the east
area
of the residences
,
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and is connected with a path to the main
road
. In the future, the Islip town
centre
layout is developed wider. The
centre
of the main
road
is modified by adding a dual carriageway and surrounding the city
centre
. The shops'
area
in the south of the main
road
is unchanged
while
the shops which are located in the south of it are demolished and it is made into some facilities
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of the bus station, shopping
centre
, car park, and new housing
area
with small path to the main
road
. The main
road
on the dual carriageway is replaced to be a pedestrian path. The housing
area
in the south of the maps is passed by a dual carriageway and some of them are redeveloped as new housing with a smaller park. The school is relocated to the southernmost of the maps and housing remains steady there.
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